Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Areas of Improvement


4 comments:

  1. To make your blog better you could add the year to some of the achivements Hamilton had.

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  2. This blog was great, but there was several grammar mistakes, most in the biography.

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  3. One area of improvement that you could work on is the flow between sentences.

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  4. The diffrent spacing and fonts through the posts was a little confusing.

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